The meaning of Having children to me.
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a child a year after I got married. It would have been nice if the honeymoon was a little longer, but I always wanted to have a child.
It was so tired and difficult that I didn\'t know how I lived for 100 days after I had my first child.
It was also my first time raising a child, so I and my wife were clumsy and difficult. My parents were also far away, so I had a hard time physically and mentally because I couldn\'t get help.
However, by the time the child grew up and had a second child, I had the know-how of it and became more and more relaxed.
However, I was always worried that they would get hurt while raising them, and I had a little other concern about studying and doing more things I wanted to do.
Still, I am so happy that my family is doing their best every moment to make pleasant memories every week.
강사 첨삭
Hi Evan:)
I think your family is very wonderful. Having children may be hard, but everything is worth it until the end. You guys have a very strong relationship with one another. I hope this won\'t change even if they are already grown-ups.
I had a child a year after I got married.
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It would have been nice if the honeymoon was a little longer, but I always wanted to have a child.
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It was so tired and difficult that I didn\'t know how I lived for 100 days after I had my first child.
>> I was so tired. The experience was so difficult. I don\'t even know how I lived for 100 days after I had my first child.
It was also my first time raising a child, so I and my wife were clumsy and difficult.
>> It was also my first time raising a child, so me and my wife were clumsy.
My parents were also far away, so I had a hard time physically and mentally because I couldn\'t get help.
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However, by the time the child grew up and had a second child, I had the know-how of it and became more and more relaxed.
>> However, by the time our child grew up and had our second child, we already know the basics so we felt more relaxed.
However, I was always worried that they would get hurt while raising them, and I had a little other concern about studying and doing more things I wanted to do.
>> However, I was always worry that they would get hurt while we were raising them. I had a little concern about studying and doing more things that I wanted to do.
Still, I am so happy that my family is doing their best every moment to make pleasant memories every week.
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