The meaning of the professional

2011-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Whitney

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I'd like to make the prediction that new coming professional class would shake the industrial world. Literally, we are all heading toward the age of that professionalism surpasses the amateurism and that the pure capitalism, healthy free competition and the true merit system are realized and that the businessmen who can solve the problems using the exact knowledge and technique according to priority are generalized, that the professionals training themselves to the higher level as competition are on the increase. Have you heard the word of “self-realization of the prediction”? This word is what the U.S. sociologist Robert K. Merton insisted. This word means that the a groundless prediction can arouse the new behavior and this behavior finally makes that prediction real.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! This is a very difficult subject matter to discuss. Anyway, here are my corrections. :) I'd like to make the prediction that new coming professional class would shake the industrial world.  >> I'd like to make a prediction that new coming professional classes would shake the industrial world. Literally, we are all heading toward the age of that professionalism surpasses the amateurism and that the pure capitalism, healthy free competition and the true merit system are realized and that the businessmen who can solve the problems using the exact knowledge and technique according to priority are generalized, that the professionals training themselves to the higher level as competition are on the increase.  >> Literally, we are all heading towards the age that professionalism surpasses the amateurism and that pure capitalism, healthy-free competition, and the true merit system are realized. Businessmen who can solve problems using the exact knowledge and technique according to priority are generalized. Professionals training themselves to the higher level as competition are also going to increase. Have you heard the word of “self-realization of the prediction”? This word is what the U.S. sociologist Robert K. Merton insisted.  >> Have you heard of the term, Self-realization of a prediction, This term is what U.S. sociologist Robert K. Merton insisted. This word means that the a groundless prediction can arouse the new behavior and this behavior finally makes that prediction real. >> This term means that a groundless prediction can arouse the new behavior, and this behavior finally makes that prediction real.

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