The meaning of volunteering for me

2010-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

Avoiding challenging will be able to block me from growing up and getting more mature since I will lost the opportunites I can learn from the fail experiences. Meanwhile, I started to volunteer to teacher middle school students. I wouldn't have tried to teach English if I hadn't read the article since I think my English is not the best and good enough to make money. However, I tried this in order to recover my weakness that I noticed lately. Second, I have been thinking that I really need to distribute to the society because I'm a social person and I got help from other social members everyday. For example, I use the subway everyday and the subway is being operated by many people. In addition, I walk clean roads, take buses, and somebody take my trash.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!   It’s good that you are interested in taking part of the society. You have a good heart to be thinking of what others do for you and I’m also glad that you appreciate what they do. Take care! ^_^   Avoiding challenging will be able to block me from growing up and getting more mature since I will lost the opportunites I can learn from the fail experiences. >> Avoiding challenges for me will become a barrier for my growth and maturity because I believe that I can learn from my mistakes or experiences.   Meanwhile, I started to volunteer to teacher middle school students. >> Anyway, I started to be a volunteer teacher to middle school students.   I wouldn't have tried to teach English if I hadn't read the article since I think my English is not the best and good enough to make money. >> I wouldn't have tried to teach English if I hadn't read the article since I think my English is not that good enough to make money.   However, I tried this in order to recover my weakness that I noticed lately. >> However, I tried this in order to overcome my weaknesses that I noticed lately.   Second, I have been thinking that I really need to distribute to the society because I'm a social person and I got help from other social members everyday. >> I have also been thinking that I really need to contribute to the society because I'm a social worker and I got help from others everyday.   For example, I use the subway everyday and the subway is being operated by many people. >> For example, I use the subway everyday because it is being used by many people.   In addition, I walk clean roads, take buses, and somebody take my trash. >> In addition, I also walked on clean roads, take the bus and others would also clean my trash.

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