The meaning of volunteering for me

2010-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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In the mean time, I think I have gotten more chances to have good education than others do. That is unfair. We force people on agreeing with we have the exactly same opportunites to learn but that is not true. Moreover, it will never be true. We have different family enviorment. Somebody takes their children to foriegn conturies to teach second languages but others can't even buy their kid books. So, if I have more chances to learn so that I get more incomes or abilities, I definately distribute to others who don't have those. Volunteering has a lot of meaning for me. It makes me to get over my wrong mindness and is the way I can fulfill my thoughts in real. And, I hope my English is good enough to help them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!   You really have a kind heart to be willing to help other people. I am amazed that you want to improve English not only for yourself but also for others. I believe that because of your kindness, you can help a lot of people around you. Take care! ^_^   In the mean time, I think I have gotten more chances to have good education than others do. >> I can say that I have gotten more chances to have a good education than others do.   That is unfair. >> For me, that is unfair.   We force people on agreeing with we have the exactly same opportunites to learn but that is not true. >> We sometimes force people to believe that we have the same opportunity like the others but that is not true.   Moreover, it will never be true. >> It will never come true.   We have different family enviorment. >> We live in a different environment.   Somebody takes their children to foriegn conturies to teach second languages but others can't even buy their kid books. >> Some people can afford to send their kids to schools in other countries while others can’t even afford to buy books for them.   So, if I have more chances to learn so that I get more incomes or abilities, I definately distribute to others who don't have those. >> So if I ever have the chance to earn a lot, I will definitely donate some of what I have earned to the less fortunate.   Volunteering has a lot of meaning for me. >> Correct   It makes me to get over my wrong mindness and is the way I can fulfill my thoughts in real. >> It helps me get over my mistakes and fulfill my goals.   And, I hope my English is good enough to help them. >> And I hope that my English skill is good enough to help others.

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