The memorable experience in india
학생이 쓴 원문
I remember that I visited the Taj Mahal.
When I saw the Taj Mahal, I was overwhelmed by the awesome mausoleum.
I felt like that building moves toward me.
And the beauty of symmetry was the best among the buildings that I experienced.
I never forget the sight.
강사 첨삭
You are fortunate enough, [이름] [이름]! I am sure you will always have that memory with you! Take care! -Faith-
I remember that I visited the Taj Mahal.>> CORRECT
When I saw the Taj Mahal, I was overwhelmed by the awesome mausoleum.
When I saw the Taj Mahal, I was overwhelmed by the awesome mausoleum.
>> When I saw the Taj Mahal, I was overwhelmed by this awesome mausoleum.
I felt like that building moves toward me.
I felt like that building moves toward me.
>> I felt like that building moved toward me.
And the beauty of symmetry was the best among the buildings that I experienced.
And the beauty of symmetry was the best among the buildings that I experienced.
>> The beauty of its symmetry was the best among the buildings that I have seen.
I never forget the sight.
I never forget the sight.
>> I could never forget the sight.
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