The memory that I can’t forget in my life
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The memory that I can’t forget in my life is when I say fireflies at Kota Kinabalu. We go into the river with a boat and when our guide illuminate trees fireflies were shining very brightly. It was really beautiful and me and my mom cried. I don’t know I why cried but I felt weird. It was touching and I don’t want to forget this memory.
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The memory that I can’t forget in my life is when I say fireflies at Kota Kinabalu.
>>The memory that I can’t forget in my life is when I saw fireflies at Kota Kinabalu.
We go into the river with a boat and when our guide illuminate trees fireflies were shining very brightly.
>>We go into the river with a boat and when our guide illuminate trees, fireflies were shining very brightly.
It was really beautiful and me and my mom cried.
>>CORRECT
I don’t know I why cried but I felt weird.
>>CORRECT
It was touching and I don’t want to forget this memory.
>>CORRECT
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