The methods that I can improve the World
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There are many kinds of things that I make the world improve even though I am a small person.
>>I can do many things to make the world a better place.
Those are like this ; Don\'k leave food, don\'t throw away the trash on the ground, doing separate collection well, pull off the electronics that we don\'t use, switch things that we don\'t need etc.
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I\'d like to explain switching things in more detail.
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My students and I switched things that we don\'t need any more last Thuesday.
>>My students and I switched things that we no longer need last Tuesday.
We brought many kinds of things.
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Those\'s state were good.
>>Their condition was still good.
First, each of us arranged goods neatly.
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We checked them here and there, Finally we started to haggle with things that we want to switch.
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It was really fun and beneficail.
>>It was really fun and beneficial.
My students were really enjoyed the time.
>>My students really enjoyed their time.
We make a flea market in my apartment every year.
>>We tend to have a flea market in my apartment every year.
From children to old people join the event enthusiastically.
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I hope many people to concern the world problem and try to solve it.
>>I hope many people will be concerned with the world issues and try to solve them.
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