The monday blues
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Sally!
As you know, I'm so tired today and the status of connecting was not good.
But I was also happy with you.
I want you to check my email written bellow.
Have a good night.
We checked this part.
We did as you told me, so we were get the normal results.
Details of it are attached in this mail.
When you visit our office, we want to discuss about the data process.
We will prepare some questions to receive advice from you.
Thank you very much for your help.
p.s the Monday is very hard to working person.
So I need to a cup of coffee.
강사 첨삭
Hello dear [이름]^^ Thank you so much for sending your composition^_^ I hope you can take a rest tonight^^Sweet dreams^_^
T. Sally
Hi, Sally!
>>CORRECTAs you know, I\'m so tired today and the status of connecting was not good.
>>>Or As you know, I\'m so tired today and the line connection was not good.But I was also happy with you.
>>>CORRECTI want you to check my email written bellow.
>>>I want you to check my email written below.Have a good night.>>>CORRECTWe checked this part.
>>>CORRECTWe did as you told me, so we were get the normal results.
>>>We did what you told me, so we got the normal results.Details of it are attached in this mail.
>>>CORRECTWhen you visit our office, we want to discuss about the data process.
>>>CORRECTWe will prepare some questions to receive advice from you.
>>>CORRECT
>>>Or We will prepare some questions so we can learn advice from youThank you very much for your help.>>>CORRECTp.s the Monday is very hard to working person.
>>>P.S Mondays would bevery hard for working people.So I need to a cup of coffee.
>>So I need to have a cup of coffee.
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