The Most Advanced Alphabet, Hangul
학생이 쓴 원문
King Sejong makes hangul!
Hangul is easy and great word for our people!!!
But,Nowadays, teenagers use short word from Hangul!
Short words is internet words! It will become forgotten and throw away our culture!
So, we should not use Internet words!
I use internet words in chat! But I try to reduce Internet words!
Because this story give me a convince!^^ Don't use Internet words~
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sarah!
Wow!
You\'re right!The young generation of today are making their own language by changing the original language.
Because of their constant usage of that kind of language, there will come a time when the original language will be forgotten.
This consequence is really terrible because our language is a part of our culture.
Language and culture cannot be separated because they are a part of each other.
Anyway, enjoy your Thursday evening!I\'ll see you tomorrow!
~~T. Heidi _^-^_
King Sejong makes hangul!
>>>King Sejong made hangul!Hangul is easy and great word for our people!!!
>>>Hangul is easy and it is a great language for our people!!!But,Nowadays, teenagers use short word from Hangul!
>>>But nowadays, teenagers are making short words for Hangul!Short words is internet words!
>>>Short words are internet words!
It will become forgotten and throw away our culture!
>>>Hangul will be forgotten and it will throw away our culture!So, we should not use Internet words!>>>So, we should not use internet words!
I use internet words in chat!
>>>Correct!
But I try to reduce Internet words! Because this story give me a convince!^^ Don\'t use Internet words~
>>>I try to reduce my usage of internet words because this consequence convinced me not to use internet words.~>>>Or: I try to limit using internet words because this consequence convinced me not to use internet words.~
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