The most annoying at work
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강사 첨삭
Hello sir,
I think this is your shortest composition ever. What happened to you? Good job, nevertheless. It\'s short but concise. Enjoy your weekend! See you on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Man should be a work.
>> Man should work.
Human is a social animal.
>> correct!
Human have to get a good relationships in his organization.
>> Humans have to get a good relationship in his organization.
Man need to feel a sense of belongs, too.
>> Man needs to feel a sense of belonging, too.
It\'s a important to keep the run of many people.
>> It\'s important to keep tab of many people.
Because all the people has a each personality, it\'s a very difficult to maintain a good relationship with everyone.
>> Because each person has his/her own personality, it\'s very difficult to maintain a good relationship with everyone.
That is the hardest thing.
>> correct!
And that is the most annoying at work.
>> correct!
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