The most attractive thing in Daegwallyeong
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I liked most the trails surrounded by a lot of pine trees. I felt refreshed and healthy with the Phytoncide from pine trees. And the trees are very tall, so I didn\'t worry about the strong sunshine. I saw three falls while tracking the road. Those added some pleasure.
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Happy Monday, Gi [이름]!
Wow! I can already imagine how calm and relaxing the place you described is. It\'s really true that nature can heal, based on what you wrote, and hopefully, I can also visit places like these soon!
-T. Caitlyn
Wow! I can already imagine how calm and relaxing the place you described is. It\'s really true that nature can heal, based on what you wrote, and hopefully, I can also visit places like these soon!
-T. Caitlyn
I liked most the trails surrounded by a lot of pine trees.
>> I liked the trails surrounded by a lot of pine trees the most.
I felt refreshed and healthy with the Phytoncide from pine trees.
>> CORRECT
And the trees are very tall, so I didn\'t worry about the strong sunshine.
>> CORRECT
I saw three falls while tracking the road.
>> CORRECT
Those added some pleasure.
>> CORRECT
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