The most beautiful thing for me
학생이 쓴 원문
The moon is beautiful in the universe for me. When I look at the moon I can see that clearly and it looks beautiful and kind of mysterious. And the moon helps the earth turn itself. It must be amazing.
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T. DON
The moon is beautiful in the universe for me. When I look at the moon I
can see that clearly and it looks beautiful and kind of mysterious. And
the moon helps the earth turn itself. It must be amazing.
>> The moon is the most beautiful in the universe for me. When I look at the moon, I
can see it clearly and it looks beautiful and mysterious. And
the moon helps the earth turn itself. Isn\'t that amazing?
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