The most common impolite things

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A wonderful Monday to you!

You have very good ideas in your composition today. Well, you are correct. Everyone must learn how to be polite with each other for a peaceful and a wonderful world to live in. Thank you for sending in your composition. I hope you\'d be able to finish your article today.

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~T. Lynn

We are the world who live with us.

>>We all live in one world.

We must respect the other someone.

>>We must respect other people.

But the reality is not so.

>>correct

We ignore and treat badly the other someone.

>>We ignore and treat other people badly.

For example, people talked loudly in public places and having loudly conversation on cellphone in subway.

>> For example, people talk loudly in public places and having loud conversation on their cellphone in the subway.

That is really unsightly.

>>correct

Especially I hate someone to violate an appointment.

>>I especially hate someone who violate an appointment.

Like all people, time is precious to me.

>>Like most people, time is precious to me.

To break a promise is to take away a time.

>>To break a promise is to take away time.

Also while I\'m talking it is someone who interruptting me.

>>Also, while I\'m talking and someone keeps interrupting me.

And while people are in the line, it is someone who jump in the line.

>> And while people are falling in line, then someone cuts in line.

That is very impolite.

>>correct

It\'s also sometimes often come from cultural differences.

>>It also sometimes  come from cultural differences.

Korean and American and European, Philipin are different from culture.

>>Koreans, Americans, Europeans and Filipinos have different cultures.

But people understand it.

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If you see the look of them, you can understand.

>>If you see the look on their faces, you can understand.

Rudness often gives us to displeasure.

>>Rudeness often give us displeasure.

If I am a unpleasant, I can\'t my work.

>>If I am unpleasant, I can\'t do my work.

Again speaking, we are the world who live with us.

>>I repeat, we are living in one world.

You shall be considerate the someone.

>>We should be considerate to others.

And then the world will be beautiful.

>>correct