The most common thing done by Koreans in their New Year.
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Thank you for sending in your homework. I really appreciate it. And as they say, late is better than never.^^ And with regards to the gifts for your relatives, why not give them a compilation of your photos together.^^ If you have questions, please don\'t hesitate to ask me during our class. I hope to see you tomorrow.^^
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Hi, Kristel;)
>>Hi Kristel!
Sorry for the late homework.
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OR>>I\'m sorry for making my homework late.
There are many common things done by Koreans in their New Year day.
>>There are many common things done by Koreans on New Year\'s Day.
First of all, we do \'Charae\', which is ancestor-memorial rite.
>>First of all, we do \"Charae\" which is an ancestor-memorial rite.
We venerate our ancestors and appreciate their blessing.
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Also, we perform a New Year\'s bow.
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Children bow to their parents and in return parents give some money and words of wisdom.
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Finally, we eat \"Ddeokguk\", rice ckae soup.
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By eating this soup, we consider ourselves as getting one year older.
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I think these three are the most common things done by Koreans in their New Year.
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And when I met my relatives who are 17 years old , I realized they would graduate
middle school next week or two.
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I want to give some presents for their graduation, but I have no idea what to give.
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Do you have any good idea?:)
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Have a great day, Kristel:) and sorry for the late homework again:)
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