The most common thing done by Koreans in their New Year.

2014-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, Kristel;) Sorry for the late homework. There are many common things done by Koreans in their New Year day. First of all, we do 'Charae', which is ancestor-memorial rite. We venerate our ancestors and appreciate their blessing. Also, we perform a New Year's bow. Children bow to their parents and in return parents give some money and words of wisdom. Finally, we eat "Ddeokguk", rice ckae soup. By eating this soup, we consider ourselves as getting one year older. I think these three are the most common things done by Koreans in their New Year. And when I met my relatives who are 17 years old , I realized they would graduate middle school next week or two. I want to give some presents for their graduation, but I have no idea what to give. Do you have any good idea?:) Have a great day, Kristel:) and sorry for the late homework again:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Happy Monday!

Thank you for sending in your homework. I really appreciate it.  And as they say, late is better than never.^^ And with regards to the gifts for your relatives, why not give them a compilation of your photos together.^^ If you have questions, please don\'t hesitate to ask me during our class. I hope to see  you tomorrow.^^

~T. Kristel^^

Hi, Kristel;) 

>>Hi Kristel!

Sorry for the late homework.

>>Correct

OR>>I\'m sorry for making my homework late.
There are many common things done by Koreans in their New Year day.

>>There are many common things done by Koreans on New Year\'s Day.
 First of all, we do \'Charae\', which is ancestor-memorial rite.

>>First of all, we do \"Charae\" which is an ancestor-memorial rite.
 We venerate our ancestors and appreciate their blessing.

>>Correct
 Also, we perform a New Year\'s bow.

>>Correct
 Children bow to their parents and in return parents give some money and words of wisdom.

>>Correct
 Finally, we eat \"Ddeokguk\", rice ckae soup.

>>Correct (check your spelling though)
 By eating this soup, we consider ourselves as getting one year older.
>>Correct
I think these three are the most common things done by Koreans in their New Year.
>>Correct
And when I met my relatives who are 17 years old , I realized they would graduate 
 middle school next week or two.

>>Correct

 I want to give some presents for their graduation, but I have no idea what to give.

>>Correct

 Do you have any good idea?:)
>>Correct
Have a great day, Kristel:) and sorry for the late homework again:)

>>Correct

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