The most delicious fruit
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Our country has many yummy fruits. Among them I like sweet persimmons most. I like the hard texture as well as sweet taste. The fruit has plenty of juice and less seeds than any other fruit, so we can enjoy whole the fruits without any efforts to pick out seeds. This season of the fruit is fall but nowadays we can enjoy it until winter thanks to the advanced store technology.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thanks for completing your homework!
I\'d love to try persimmons too! ^^
I\'d love to try persimmons too! ^^
-T.Jhozel
Our country has many yummy fruits.
>> Correct!
OR: Our country is rich in delicious fruits.
OR: Our country is rich in delicious fruits.
Among them I like sweet persimmons most.
>> Correct!
OR: Sweet persimmons are my favorite among them.
OR: Sweet persimmons are my favorite among them.
I like the hard texture as well as sweet taste.
>> I like the hard texture as well as the sweet flavor.
The fruit has plenty of juice and less seeds than any other fruit, so we can enjoy whole the fruits without any efforts to pick out seeds.
>> The fruit has more juice and fewer seeds than any other fruit, so we can eat the whole fruit without having to pick out the seeds.
This season of the fruit is fall but nowadays we can enjoy it until winter thanks to the advanced store technology.
>> This fruit\'s season is in the fall, but thanks to advanced technology, we can now enjoy it until the winter.
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