The most difficult thing in a novel
학생이 쓴 원문
I think writing the first sentence is the most difficult. Of course writing the first episode is also very difficult. We need to get our readers to see the next episode. However, I think the first sentence is the most difficult because if you don\'t like the first sentence, you often don\'t want to see it, and also because the first sentence can often be a key point summarizing everything in the novel.
강사 첨삭
I think writing the first sentence is the most difficult.
>> CORRECT
Of course writing the first episode is also very difficult.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Writing the first episode, of course, is difficult as well.
OR >> Writing the first episode, of course, is difficult as well.
We need to get our readers to see the next episode.
>> CORRECT
OR >> We need to make readers want to read the next episode.
However, I think the first sentence is the most difficult because if you don\'t like the first sentence, you often don\'t want to see it, and also because the first sentence can often be a key point summarizing everything in the novel.
>> However, I think the first sentence is the most difficult. If readers don’t like it, they often won’t continue reading. It’s also challenging because the first sentence often serves as a key summary of the novel
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