the most emvrrassing moment

2013-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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the most embrrassing moment of my life happened . i am baker and barrister ^^ a few years ago, i went to the mnergency room. becouse i have allergic to caffeine. i can embarrassing when i found out the truth. some caffeine gives me insomnia and feel my heart pounppig for a long. al so i have a hard stomachache. my wish to eat great coffee everywhere~

강사 첨삭

Hello there!^^  

Thank you for having the time to do your homework and for sharing your thoughts and your opinion about this matter. :)

I appreciate your efforts and continue to strive for the better! :)

T. Hannah^^

the most embrrassing moment of my life happened .

>>The most embarrassing moment in my life is when...

>>The most embarrassing moment in my life.

i am baker and barrister ^^

>>I am a baker and a barrister.

a few years ago, i went to the mnergency room.

>>A few years ago, I went to an emergency room.

>>I went to an emergency room a few years ago.

becouse i have allergic to caffeine.

>>Because I am allergic to caffeine.

i can embarrassing when i found out the truth.

>>I was embarrassed to know the truth.

some caffeine gives me insomnia and feel my heart pounppig for a long.

>>Coffee gives me insomnia and I feel that my heart is palpitating.

al so i have a hard stomachache.

>>I also have severe stomachache.

my wish to eat great coffee everywhere~

>>My wish is to drink good coffee everywhere.

>>My wish is to taste the best coffee all over the world.

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