the most emvrrassing moment
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the most embrrassing moment of my life happened .>>The most embarrassing moment in my life is when...
>>The most embarrassing moment in my life.
i am baker and barrister ^^
>>I am a baker and a barrister.
a few years ago, i went to the mnergency room.
>>A few years ago, I went to an emergency room.
>>I went to an emergency room a few years ago.
becouse i have allergic to caffeine.
>>Because I am allergic to caffeine.
i can embarrassing when i found out the truth.
>>I was embarrassed to know the truth.
some caffeine gives me insomnia and feel my heart pounppig for a long.
>>Coffee gives me insomnia and I feel that my heart is palpitating.
al so i have a hard stomachache.
>>I also have severe stomachache.
my wish to eat great coffee everywhere~
>>My wish is to drink good coffee everywhere.
>>My wish is to taste the best coffee all over the world.
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