The most encouraging book I've ever read
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Power of reading for 10 minutes everyday, which is written by a nurse, is the most encouraging book among the ones I've read recently.
The writer confesses that she as a nurse had lived for 2 years without her own life and it could have come close to kill herself. The only way to keep her living was to read a book on top priority everyday. She consistently tells people how many oppotunities reading on a regular basis could bring them and how flourising their lives might become.
Since it was the time I felt sick of all the things I had to do, it stimulated me.
Nowadays, I'm enjoying a new hobby. According to her advice, I purchased a book and it was a sort of tedious and disappointing. However, it was quite meaningful for me to buy a book so as to improve the quality of my life. I would like to appreciate her letting me know the value of reading.
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Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I agree with you! We can really learn a lot of things by reading books and even in watching movies or tv series.
I think that would be a very interesting book. I hope I can find it.
Anyway, people who are suffering from deppression is really scary. If you are the person who doesn\'t want to express your feelings to other people, I advise you to write it. That is one of the ways to express your feelings. You could do that too. But I advise you to talk to your family, friends and or even to me. You could talk to me about your problems. I\'m not just your teacher but I am also your friend. It\'s hard to hold it inside you because it will drive you crazy. Trust me because I\'ve been there.
Let\'s talk more about this in our class tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Power of reading for 10 minutes everyday, which is written by a nurse, is the most encouraging book among the ones I\'ve read recently.
>> Correct^^>> Power of reading for 10 minutes every day is written by a nurse, is the most encouraging book among the ones I\'ve read recently. The writer confesses that she as a nurse had lived for 2 years without her own life and it could have come close to kill herself.
>> The writer confessed that she as a nurse had lived her life for 2 years with depression and could have killed herself.
The only way to keep her living was to read a book on top priority everyday.
>> The only way that kept her alive was by reading a book every day and made it as her top priority.
She consistently tells people how many oppotunities reading on a regular basis could bring them and how flourising their lives might become. >> She consistently tells people that reading on a regular basis could give them opprtunities and flourish their lives.Since it was the time I felt sick of all the things I had to do, it stimulated me. >> Since the time I felt sich of all the things I had to do, it stimulated me.Nowadays, I\'m enjoying a new hobby.
>> CORRECT^^
According to her advice, I purchased a book and it was a sort of tedious and disappointing.
>> I took her advice, I purchased a book and it was sort of tedious and disappointing.
However, it was quite meaningful for me to buy a book so as to improve the quality of my life.
>> However, it was quite meaningful for me to buy a book to improve the quality of my life.
I would like to appreciate her letting me know the value of reading.
>> I would like to appreciate her by letting me know the value of reading.
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