The most encouraging words I heard.
학생이 쓴 원문
"Cheer up! Because we are all humans!"
This sentence is the most encouraging words I've ever heard.
We often make mistakes and can fail.
But almost people are furious with someone who makes mistakes.
It's wrong.
At times we need warm encouragement rather than criticism.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Yes! Cheer up!^^
Encourage yourself and be an encourgement to others^^
The best way is to always be positive with the things that we do and we must also do
our best!^^
Mistakes must be taken as a thought to do better and not taken negatively.
Do your best always [이름]^^
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
\"Cheer up! Because we are all humans!\"
>> CORRECT
OR> Be happy! We are just but people.This sentence is the most encouraging words I\'ve ever heard.
>> This sentence was the most encouraging words I\'ve ever heard.We often make mistakes and can fail.
>> CORRECT
OR> We can fail or make mistakes sometimes.But almost people are furious with someone who makes mistakes.
>> But almost all people get furious with someone who makes mistakes.It\'s wrong.
>> CORRECT
OR> That\'s not right. At times we need warm encouragement rather than criticism.
>> CORRECT
OR> Sometimes compliments are better than criticism
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