The Most Exciting Thing I Have Done
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a lot of exciting things I have done, but the thing I have done recently is starting to learn driving skills. Actually, I didn\'t have readiness of [이름]d that time, but my mother led me from the home. Then, I enrolled the driving academy in that way. Now, I thankful for my mom. The [이름]d that I can drive by myself is make me feel a sense of accomplishment. I hope that I have my car as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kate!
You started out strong in this composition.
Look at some of the suggestions in the other sentences.
I have given you ways on how to properly construct sentences.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are a lot of exciting things I have done, but the thing I have done recently is starting to learn driving skills.
>> Correct
Actually, I didn\'t have readiness of [이름]d that time, but my mother led me from the home.
>> Actually, I wasn\'t mentally ready that time, but my mother helped me to get out of the house.
Then, I enrolled the driving academy in that way.
>> Then, she brought me to enroll in a driving academy.
Now, I thankful for my mom.
>> Now, I am thankful to my mom.
The [이름]d that I can drive by myself is make me feel a sense of accomplishment.
>> Thinking that I can drive by myself is giving me a sense of accomplishment.
I hope that I have my car as soon as possible.
>> I hope that I can have my own car as soon as possible.
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