the most important animal

I think the most important animal in Korea maybe a dog as other countries alike. First of all, it is no doubt that dogs are the most friendly animal. They can be a friend and one of family member with human. So the number of people who have dog as a family and their accompany for the whole life increases. This atmosphere makes the industry related to dogs promote and it is settled perfectly. Second reason is that dogs are playing important roles in many departments. For example, some find dangerous stuffs that haman cannot find, using their nosal instinct. And some become an eye for the blind. They are willing to guide for their difficulties. Others are used in treating the people who have psycologic illness. For those reason, I think it is alike with other countries but in Korea, dogs are considered the most important animal.

Hi [이름]! ^^Thank you for taking the time to answer the essay topics. ^^ You opinion and thoughts are expressed clearly although there are a few hitches in the grammar but most of the corrections provide the better word for what you mean. ^^Good work. ^^All good things,==Teacher Charlie==I think the most important animal in Korea maybe a dog as other countries alike. >> I think the most important animal in Korea, much like in other countries, is the dog.First of all, it is no doubt that dogs are the most friendly animal. >> I say this for two reasons. First, there is no doubt that dogs are the friendliest among the animals.They can be a friend and one of family member with human. So the number of people who have dog as a family and their accompany for the whole life increases. >> They can both be a friend and family to humans, that is why the number of people considering dogs as family and life-long accompaniment is increasing.This atmosphere makes the industry related to dogs promote and it is settled perfectly.>> This setting leads to the promotion of dog shelters and adoption with no problems whatsoever. Second reason is that dogs are playing important roles in many departments. >> The second reason is that dogs play important roles in many fields.For example, some find dangerous stuffs that haman cannot find, using their nosal instinct. >> For example, some dogs can detect by sniffing out dangerous stuff that humans couldn\'t normally find.And some become an eye for the blind. They are willing to guide for their difficulties. >> Also, some dogs act as guides for the blind; helping their masters through their difficulties.Others are used in treating the people who have psycologic illness. >> Others, help in the treatment of people with psychological or mental problems. For those reason, I think it is alike with other countries but in Korea, dogs are considered the most important animal. >> For these reasons, I think that dogs are the most important animals not only in Korea but in other countries as well.