The most important factor
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I think the most important thing is that the new place should confirm to the guidelines set by the authorities concerned. There are some strict guidelines such as the total area of classrooms, two separate toilets for each gender, and a fire alarm and fire exit ,etc. Next the location is important because some parents sometimes visit on the way homes. And most students and parents don\'t like too noisy and crowded place. Also if possible,the cleaner place is better.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Wow! There\'s really a lot to consider when moving to a different place for an academy. I hope you can find a place that meets all the government\'s requirements.
- T. Caitlyn
I think the most important thing is that the new place should confirm to the guidelines set by the authorities concerned.
>> I think the most important thing is that the new place should conform to the guidelines set by the authorities concerned.
There are some strict guidelines such as the total area of classrooms, two separate toilets for each gender, and a fire alarm and fire exit ,etc.
>> There are strict guidelines such as the total area of classrooms, the requirement for two separate toilets for each gender, fire alarms, fire exits, and more.
Next the location is important because some parents sometimes visit on the way homes.
>> Next, the location is important because some parents visit while on their way home.
And most students and parents don\'t like too noisy and crowded place.
>> And most students and parents don\'t prefer noisy and crowded places.
Also if possible,the cleaner place is better.
>> Additionally, if possible, a cleaner place is better.
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