THE MOST IMPORTANT FEATURES OF SOMEONE'S BEAUTY

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in and for sharing your ideas about the most important features when determining someone\'s beauty. I enjoyed reading your composition.^^

What are the most important features when determining someone\'s beauty?
I think that eyes and vocal cords are the most important features.
>> I think that the eyes and the vocal cords are the most important features. 
First, eyes have very beautiful and mysterious colors.

>> Firstly, the eyes have very beautiful and mysterious colors.

Furthermore, as people say that eyes are the window of our mind, we can see the someone\'s mind through eyes.

>> Furthermore, people said that the eyes are the windows of the soul, so we can read someone\'s mind by looking into his eyes.

According to one study, when brain creates something like telling a lie, eyes moves to a specific point.

>> According to one study, when the brain creates something like telling a lie, the eyes move to a specific point.

So we may use eyes if someone is sincere or not.
>> So, we can look at someone\'s eyes if we want to know if he is sincere or not.
Second, even though it is not easy to see vocal cords, we can feel the beauty of voice.

>> Secondly, even though we cannot directly see the vocal cords, we can hear the beauty of someone\'s voice.

When people talks with someone, they have tendency to listen to a voice itself rather than contents.

>> When people talk with someone, they have a tendency to focus on the person\'s voice rather than what he is saying.

In addition, if we manage our voices in a proper way, voices hardly get old.

>> In addition, if we take care of our voice in a proper way, it will hardly get old.

Many people still can not distinguish my voice from my father\'s.

>> Correct.

For reference, my father is 76 years old. ^.^;

>> For your information, my father is 76 years old. ^.^;