the most important job

I do recommend my job as teacher only to the person who wants to have his/her own job worthy to dedicate himself/herself. The reason is that I think education is one of the most vital job among all the other jobs. We human beings are a social being and the society which we belong to must be healthy, if we want to be happy in it. It can’t be overstated to say that societal healthiness totally depends on its constituents’ healthiness. The goal of education is to help them grow their mental, piritual, and physical development up to their personal integrity. Of course it should be quality one. Therefore I believe that there is no other valuable job than education in the world.

I am so happy that you love teaching english so much, great componsation. I hope that you have a great afternoon, see you tomorrow. I do recommend my job as teacher only to the person who wants to have his/her own job worthy to dedicate himself/herself. >>Correct The  reason is that I think education is one of the most vital jobs among all the other jobs.  >>CorrectWe human beings are a social being and the society which we belong to must be healthy, if we want to be happy in it. >>Us human beings are a social being, in a society for which we must stay healthy if we want to be happy.It can’t be overstated to say that societal healthiness totally depends on its constituents’ healthiness. >>CorrectThe goal of education is to help them grow their mental, piritual, and physical development up to their personal integrity. >>Correct  Of course, it should be quality one. >>CorrectTherefore I believe that there is no other valuable job than education in the world. >>Correct