The most important rule in my family is…
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The most important rule in my family is to be friends with my parents, but be polite. Parents are adults. It is not to absolutely trust my parents, but to respect my parents as adults. Of course, these rules are a long-standing emotional culture in Korea, so probably many other families have similar rules.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The most important rule in my family is to be friends with my parents, but be polite.
>>> CORRECT!
Parents are adults. It is not to absolutely trust my parents, but to respect my parents as adults.
>>> CORRECT!
Of course, these rules are a long-standing emotional culture in Korea, so probably many other families have similar rules.
>>> CORRECT!
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