The most important skill of a successful leader or politician is good communication skill.

2017-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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It is right that communication skill is one of the important skill for a leader or a politicians. But I don't think that communication skill is the most substantial. First, an ability important to leader depends on the circumstance such as the condition a company encounters or a company's character or anything. For example, if a company encounters huge difficult, the necessary ability for a leader is not communication skill but problem-solving ability and finding breakthrough. If some country undergo conflict between its people, the politicians is required the integration ability. Second, I think, empathic ability is more important than communications skill. We cannot know other people's real though just communication so we need empathic ability in order to understand others, employees or citizens. This is because, people have difficulty to express their thought to a higher person. In conclusion, a leader or a politician have to be equipped with diverse ability in balance.

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It is right that communication skill is one of the important skill for a leader or a politicians.

>> A politician or a leader must know how to communicate.

But I don\'t think that communication skill is the most substantial. 

>> I don\'t think that it\'s substantial.
First, an ability important to leader depends on the circumstance such as the condition a company encounters or a company\'s character or anything.

>> The company\'s status depends on the ability of a leader to communicate well and handle things.

For example, if a company encounters huge difficult, the necessary ability for a leader is not communication skill but problem-solving ability and finding breakthrough.

>> For example, if the company has a problem, the leader should have a good strategy to solve the problem.

If some country undergo conflict between its people, the politicians is required the integration ability.

>> A leader of a country should possess integrity to handle the intercontinental conflicts.
Second, I think, empathic ability is more important than communications skill.

>> In my opinion, empathic ability is more important that having a good communication skill.

We cannot know other people\'s real though just communication so we need empathic ability in order to understand others, employees or citizens.

>> A good leader should have an empathic ability to understand his subordinate.

This is because, people have difficulty to express their thought to a higher person.

>> People have a difficulty in expressing their thoughts to their superiors.

In conclusion, a leader or a politician have to be equipped with diverse ability in balance.

>> In conclusion, a leader or a politician has to be equipped with diverse ability.


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