The most important skill of a successful leader or politician is good communication skill.
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It is right that communication skill is one of the important skill for a leader or a politicians.
>> A politician or a leader must know how to communicate.
But I don\'t think that communication skill is the most substantial.
>> I don\'t think that it\'s substantial.
First, an ability important to leader depends on the circumstance such as the condition a company encounters or a company\'s character or anything.
>> The
company\'s status depends on the ability of a leader to communicate well and handle things.
For example, if a company encounters huge difficult, the necessary ability for a leader is not communication skill but problem-solving ability and finding breakthrough.
>> For example, if the company has a problem, the leader should have a good strategy to solve the problem.
If some country undergo conflict between its people, the politicians is required the integration ability.
>> A leader of a country should possess integrity to handle the intercontinental conflicts.
Second, I think, empathic ability is more important than communications skill.
>> In my opinion, empathic ability is more important that having a good communication skill.
We cannot know other people\'s real though just communication so we need empathic ability in order to understand others, employees or citizens.
>> A good leader should have an empathic ability to understand his subordinate.
This is because, people have difficulty to express their thought to a higher person.
>> People have a difficulty in expressing their thoughts to their superiors.
In conclusion, a leader or a politician have to be equipped with diverse ability in balance.
>> In conclusion, a leader or a politician has to be equipped with diverse ability.
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