The most important thing about community

Hello Sir [이름].
What a great composition. ^^

I love it. ^^ I admire you for sharing your opinions again.

It is really important to know our community, our rights and our responsibilities.

We should be thankful for whatever we have.

I hope I will more of your ideas in class.

Teacher Nina

One is a member of a country, a profession, a civilization, a religion.

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One is not just a man.

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Our lives belong to the whole community and as long as we live, it is our privilege to do for it whatever we can.

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Each of us is a being in himself and a being in society.

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Each of us needs to understand himself and understand others.

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We need to take care of others and be taken care of ourselves.

>> We need to take care of others and be taken cared of.

We need to be considerate of others. We are all dependent on one another .

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Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.

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We have to behave toward others as we would like to have them behave toward us.

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Whatever is hurtful to us, do not do to any other person.

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This is a basic rule when we live in community.

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Volunteering and doing some good things for community is great, however, the first thing we should do is being respectful of others.

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In a modern society, individualism prevails.

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We often become selfish and pursue our own interest.

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Money is regarded as the most powerful means to have better life.

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