The most important thing for a family.
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Hi there sir!
You are right sir. We all have our responsibilities even as a child, a student or as an adult. But the day we decide to have our own family, more responsibilities are expected. Thus we must we ready for this. Thank you for your well explained answer to our homework. See you in class sir!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What is the most important thing for a family?
>> correct!
I am a man and a head of household.
>> I am a man and the head of my household.
That means that it has two responsibilities.
>> That means that I have two responsibilities.
The responsibility as a man should be always realized my value and my dream.
>> My responsibility as a man is to always realize my value and my dream.
To realize my dream, I need a lot of money.
>> correct!
The money spend for me.
>> correct!
But if I would be a head of household, I don\'t spend a money for me.
>>But as a head of the household, I can\'t spend money for me only.
The money should be spend for a family.
>> The money should be spend for my family.
The another responsibility as a head of household is to support for my family.
>> Another responsibility as a head of household is to support my family.
Sometimes the two responsibilities clash with each other, sometimes they are in harmony.
>> correct!
If a man would become a head of household, he will grow bigger his role.
>> If a man would become a head of household, his role will grow bigger.
The money which he has earned spend to support for his family.
>> The money which he has learned is needed to support his family.
That is the most important thing for a family.
>> correct!
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