The most important thing from school
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I think the most important thing I learned from school is about the world around us. Especially some subjects such as world history , world geography, social culture, anthropology are very helpful to have a deep understanding about the world. Until now they are useful to travel other countries and understand their cultures.
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I think the most important thing I learned from school is about the world around us.
>> CORRECT! Especially some subjects such as world history , world geography, social culture, anthropology are very helpful to have a deep understanding about the world.
>> CORRECT! Until now they are useful to travel other countries and understand their cultures.
>> Until now they are useful for traveling other countries and understanding their cultures.
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