the most important thing in my life
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important thing un my life is my health.
It's very simple. If I'm not healty I can't do anything.
I don't want to live long but I want to experience lot of things.
And I don't actually like hospital too.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
I completely agree with you. Health is wealth. Stay healthy!
-Teacher May -
The most important thing un my life is my health.
>>The most important thing in my life is my health.It's very simple. If I'm not healty I can't do anything.
>>CORRECTI don't want to live long but I want to experience lot of things.
>>CORRECTAnd I don't actually like hospital too.
>> I don't like being hospitalized.
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