The most important thing in pandemic.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I am a doctor, I don\'t join a strike. I think that this is the time to focus on overcoming COVID-19. It\'s not too late to delay the argue after getting over pandemic. Nowadays, people who are in emergencies wander around to find a hospital for hours. I saw the news that a man who suffered a heart attack died because there was not enough doctors to treat him. What a terrible news..... It should not happen again. The organization of doctors and the government must find a solution to satisfy each other.
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Hello [이름],
Thank you for the homework. It must really be hard for the people who are suffering in this situation. Although both parties have valid arguments, they should still try to compromise for the sake of the people. ^ ^
-Rachel
If I am a doctor, I don\'t join a strike.
>> If I were a doctor, I would not join the strike.
I think that this is the time to focus on overcoming COVID-19.
>> correct
It\'s not too late to delay the argue after getting over pandemic.
>> It\'\'s not too late to delay the argument after getting over the pandemic.
Nowadays, people who are in emergencies wander around to find a hospital for hours.
>> correct
I saw the news that a man who suffered a heart attack died because there was not enough doctors to treat him.
>> correct
>> I saw the news about a man suffering from heart attack who died because there was an inadequate number of doctors to treat him.
What a terrible news..... It should not happen again.
>> correct (acceptable in spoken English)
>> What a terrible news! It should not happen again.
The organization of doctors and the government must find a solution to satisfy each other.
>> correct
>> The doctors\' organization and the government must compromise to end their conflict.
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