The most important thing school should teach children is..
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important thing school should teach children is character. No matter how smart and money they are, if they don\'t have a good personality, people around they will leave and they will not be happy. I think the most important thing in life is character.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The most important thing school should teach children is character.
>>> CORRECT!
No matter how smart and money they are, if they don\'t have a good personality, people around they will leave and they will not be happy.
>>> CORRECT!
I think the most important thing in life is character.
>>> CORRECT!
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