The most important thing when we teach children is patience.
학생이 쓴 원문
Children like to joke each other.
School is a place where children gather around.
My circumstances are very noisy.
I am a bit confused.
I am O.K.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
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-T. Ashley
Children like to joke each other.
>> Children like to tell jokes to each other.
School is a place where children gather around.
>> Correct
>> School is a place where students get to know each other.
My circumstances are very noisy.
>> My environment is very noisy.
I am a bit confused.
>> Correct
>> I am a bit bewildered.
I am O.K.
>> I am fine.
Thanks for reading.
>> Correct
>> Thank you for reading.
Bye.
>> Correct
>> Goodbye.
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