the most influential person

Personally, I think my professor Dr.Tan is the most influential person in my university. First, he can influence how university student think about oneself, how they live themselve's life. when we attend his lecture, we are inspired by him. Also, he help many people materialy and mentaly, even though he doesn't know whom, when they need help, he always help whom. Because of these reason, I believe there is no person in my university more influential than him.

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