The most interesting people

2017-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Interesting man is very popular around people. He makes always somebody to laugh with wit and humor. But he is socially low a chance of success. He is just a gag man or a comedian. The world demands a ability man with wit and humor. They serve to make formal atmosphere into a smooth tone of air in their organization. They are a ability man. The same goes for actors. Actors should be faithful to their role. Actors need to have a ad lib. Ad=lib comes from wit and humor. The actors with wit and humor are very high the possibility of a social success. Now, to success in the world, everyone must has a wit and humor. You should not only have a wit and humor.

강사 첨삭

Hi there sir!
You are correct sir. Someone who is very humorous always draws the crowd. He can make an unpleasant situation funny and thus reduce the tension. Women are often times attracted to men with wit and humor. What about you sir, do you think you have wit and humor?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Interesting man is very popular around people.
>> Interesting men are very popular around people.
OR>> An interesting man is very popular among people.
He makes always somebody to laugh with wit and humor.
>> He always makes somebody laugh with his wit and humor.
But he is socially low a chance of success.
>> But socially, he has a low chance to succeed.
He is just a gag man or a comedian.
>> correct!
The world demands a ability man with wit and humor.
>> The world demands a man with ability coupled with wit and humor.
They serve to make formal atmosphere into a smooth tone of air in their organization.
>> correct!
They are a ability man.
>> They are men with ability.
The same goes for actors.
>> correct!
Actors should be faithful to their roles.
>> correct!
Actors need to have a ad lib. Ad=lib comes from wit and humor.
>> Actors need to do some ad-lib. Ad-lib comes from wit and humor.
The actors with wit and humor are very high the possibility of a social success.
>> The actors with wit and humor have a very high possibility of social success.
Now, to success in the world, everyone must has a wit and humor.
>> Now, to be successful in the world, everyone must have wit and humor.
You should not only have a wit and humor.
>> But you shouldn\'t only have wit and humor.
OR>> But it shouldn\'t only be wit and humor.

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