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2023-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I met three Thai young ladies when I stayed in Auckland, New Zealand. They were very friendly to Korean culture, especially Korean food. We went to popular Korean restaurants and enjoyed K-food . They called me Onnie meaning the elder sister. They are 28 years younger than me. One of them invited me to her hometown, Co Samui. I accepted her invitation, I visited her hometown right before the pandemic started. It was my first trip to Thailand. I was surprised that her family were as familiar with Korean food as she.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Gi [이름]!
I really admire how adventurous you are, in the sense that you would visit a stranger\'s house alone, and in another country at that. It\'s nice to know that you enjoyed visiting Koh Samui and were able to develop a good relationship with locals there.
- T. Caitlyn
I met three Thai young ladies when I stayed in Auckland, New Zealand. 
>> CORRECT
They were very friendly to Korean culture, especially Korean food. 
>> CORRECT
We went to popular Korean restaurants and enjoyed K-food. 
>> CORRECT
>> OR: We went to popular Korean restaurants and enjoyed the cuisine.
They called me Onnie meaning the elder sister. 
>> They called me \'Onnie,\' meaning elder sister.
They are 28 years younger than me. 
>> CORRECT
One of them invited me to her hometown, Co Samui. 
>> One of them invited me to her hometown, Koh Samui. 
I accepted her invitation, I visited her hometown right before the pandemic started. 
>>  I accepted her invitation and visited her hometown right before the pandemic started.
It was my first trip to Thailand. 
>> CORRECT
I was surprised that her family were as familiar with Korean food as she.
>>  I was surprised that her family was as familiar with Korean food as she was.

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