The most memorable dream I’ve had
학생이 쓴 원문
The most memorable dream I’ve had was when I met BTS in the dream. But it was not a kind of romantic dream. I’m at the conpany and my coworkers were them. I also spoke in English with RM. We just discussed something and that was it. It’s not a special dream but I just remember it the most.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! That sounded like a good dream. At least you got the chance to have a glimpse of experience being with them, right?
-Teacher Elise
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The most memorable dream I’ve had was when I met BTS in the dream.
>> CORRECT
But it was not a kind of romantic dream.
>> Although it was not a romantic kind of dream.
I’m at the conpany and my coworkers were them.
>> In the dream, I was at the company and they were my co-workers.
I also spoke in English with RM.
>>CORRECT
We just discussed something and that was it.
>>CORRECT
It’s not a special dream but I just remember it the most.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
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