The most memorable event
학생이 쓴 원문
The most memorable event in my life was my wedding ceremony.
Before I got married, I lived in China, and My husband lived in Seoul, so we don’t have time to prepare our wedding ceremony.
But we did a best to prepare some event. We wrote a letter to each other, and parent, and parent in law, and both of parents also wrote a letter us. That wedding day, we read a letter to express love to opponent and to express appreciate to both of parents. And parent in law read a written oath, and my parent recite their own poem to express congratulation. And my honorable professor delivered a congratulatory address(speech). So I was so happy, and never forget in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Saim,
Thank you so much for sharing the most memorable day of your life. ^^ I wish your happiness will continue! Take care!
-Faye-
The most memorable event in my life was my wedding ceremony.
>>CorrectBefore I got married, I lived in China, and My husband lived in Seoul, so we don’t have time to prepare our wedding ceremony.
>> Before I got married I lived in China and my husband lived in Seoul, so we don't have time to prepare for our wedding ceremony.But we did a best to prepare some event.
>>But we did our best to prepare for some events for our wedding.
We wrote a letter to each other, and parent, and parent in law, and both of parents also wrote a letter us.
>> We wrote a letter for each other, our parents, parents-in-law, and both of our parents also wrote a letter for us.
That wedding day, we read a lette, to express love to opponent and to express appreciate to both of parents.
>>During our wedding day, we read a letter to express love to thoese who oppose and to express appreciate to both of our parents.
And parent in law read a written oath, and my parent recite their own poem to express congratulation.
>>And my parents-in-law read a written oath anf my prents recited a poem to express their congratulations.
And my honorable professor delivered a congratulatory address(speech).
>>Correct
So I was so happy, and never forget in my life.
>> So I was so happy, and would never forget it in my life.
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