The most memorable experience I have in my hometown.
학생이 쓴 원문
I was so young when I lived in my hometown. So I didn\'t remember well. One thing I rememberd is that I used to play with my friends in play ground. We did play with an elastic cord and playing gonggi together.
I miss the friends and wonder that how they are doing. If i have a chance to meet them, I\'ll be so glad.
 
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]. Appreciate you doing your homework. Thank you for sharing a bit about your hometown and your childhood. Let us talk more about it in class. See you then \\^_^/
Here are the corrections to your composition:
The most memorable experience I have in my hometown.
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I was so young when I lived in my hometown.
>>> CORRECT =)
So I didn\'t remember well.
>>> So I do not remember well.
One thing I rememberd is that I used to play with my friends in play ground.
>>> One thing I remember is that I used to play with my friends in the playground.
We did play with an elastic cord and playing gonggi together.
>>> We played with an elastic cord and we played gonggi together.
I miss the friends and wonder that how they are doing.
>>> I miss my friends and I wonder how they are doing now.
If i have a chance to meet them, I\'ll be so glad.
>>> If I get the chance to meet them, I will be so glad.
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