the most memorable person

2011-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Hi. I am just reminding today's class. The most memorable person in my life is my husband. He always support my decision, never blame me in any situation. For example, last year we went to abroad at Rome, and I didn't buy train ticket from downtown to airport mistakenly, so we paid 100 euro fine. But he didn't blame my fault. He also counsel me whenever I have a problem. and listen attentively to me, and feel sympathy with my emotion. For these reasons, my better half is the most memorable person in my life.

강사 첨삭

Hello. Good job. I wish all the luck and happiness in your marriage .  I think you constructed your thoughts beautifully; you just have to note the corrections that I made. These are the corrections on your composition. Please find time to read them:   Hi. >>Correct. I am just reminding today's class. >> I am just reminding you about today's class.The most memorable person in my life is my husband. >>Correct. He always support my decision, never blame me in any situation.>> He always supports my decision and never blames me in any situation. For example, last year we went to abroad at Rome, and I didn't buy train ticket from downtown to airport mistakenly, so we paid 100 euro fine. >> For example, last year we went to Rome and I mistakenly didn't buy any train ticket downtown going to the airport, so we paid a 100 euro fine. But he didn't blame my fault. >> But he didn't blame me. He also counsel me whenever I have a problem. >> He also counsels me whenever I have a problem.  and listen attentively to me, and feel sympathy with my emotion. >>He listens attentively and sympathizes with me.   For these reasons, my better half is the most memorable person in my life. >>Correct.  

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