The most proud thing in Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays, because of Coronavirus, we have faced various problems. Above all, we are reluctant to go outside and It makes our living radius decreased. Whatever the circumstance does, we have to buy somethings for a living. But what if we can\'t go out and all products that we want are out of stock? In practice, there are a lot of countries suffering from this problem. However, It\'s not a big deal in Korea! Thanks to the well-organized delivery system and service (and small country size that makes it possible), we can easily get necessities while watching Netflix! We can order not only necessities including food, water, and sanitary supplements but also can order home appliances and even plants! The delivery man leaves things in front of the door and sends a notice to the customer. All we have to do is moving things into the house. It provides comfort to customers, and lessen the possibility of infection. The distribution industry in Korea is getting bigger and smarter.
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It\'s always such a treat to read your compositions! I learn a lot from your opinions as well. Keep up the outstanding work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
It\'s always such a treat to read your compositions! I learn a lot from your opinions as well. Keep up the outstanding work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
Nowadays, because of Coronavirus, we have faced various problems.
>>CORRECT!
Above all, we are reluctant to go outside and It makes our living radius decreased.
>>CORRECT!
Whatever the circumstance does, we have to buy somethings for a living.
>>Whatever the circumstance is, we have to buy some things for a living.
But what if we can\'t go out and all products that we want are out of stock?
>>CORRECT!
In practice, there are a lot of countries suffering from this problem.
>>CORRECT!
However, It\'s not a big deal in Korea! Thanks to the well-organized delivery system and service (and small country size that makes it possible), we can easily get necessities while watching Netflix!
>>CORRECT!
We can order not only necessities including food, water, and sanitary supplements but also can order home appliances and even plants!
>>CORRECT!
The delivery man leaves things in front of the door and sends a notice to the customer.
>>CORRECT!
All we have to do is moving things into the house.
>>All we have to do is to move things into the house.
It provides comfort to customers, and lessen the possibility of infection.
>>CORRECT!
The distribution industry in Korea is getting bigger and smarter.
>>CORRECT!
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