The most saddest word!

2021-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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There is a parable in my country. It is that a word pays off one\'s a thousand dollars debts. Like this, the power of positive words is to open closed mind of the other person, to turn despair into hope, and to give someone a courage. So we need to tell someone at the proper time the words of love, the words of compliment, the words of cheers and etc. what someone have said to me have made me sad, but not hurt me. The most saddest word is \"Do as I tell you\".

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Hi [이름] Ha!
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Let\'s talk about it tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There is a parable in my country.
>> Correct
It is that a word pays off one\'s a thousand dollars debts.
>> It is that a word pays off a thousand-dollar debt.
Like this, the power of positive words is to open closed mind of the other person, to turn despair into hope, and to give someone a courage.
>> It\'s like this. The power of positive words is to open the closed mind of the other person, to turn despair into hope, and to give someone courage.
So we need to tell someone at the proper time the words of love, the words of compliment, the words of cheers and etc.
>> So we need to tell someone words of love, words of compliment, words of cheer and others at the proper time.
what someone have said to me have made me sad, but not hurt me.
>> Others may have said something that didn\'t hurt me but made me sad.
The most saddest word is \"Do as I tell you\".
>> The saddest statement for me is \"Do as I tell you\".

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