The most scaring insect
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Hey [이름],
Thanks for explaining in detail what happened. Great job!
-Teacher Ash
I told you I had touched the spider whose skin is green.
>> I told you before that I touched a green spider on my way home.
If you read above\' you\'ll find the scariest insect I think is a spider.
>> If you remember, I mentioned that I am scared of spiders.
The reason why I was scared of the spider is two.
>> There are two reasons why I’m scared of spiders.
First,the appearance is gross.
>> First, the appearance is gross.
As you know, the spider has many legs and eyes.
>> CORRECT
But some people raise the spider in the house.
>> However, some people raise spiders as pets.
I don\'t understand that.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I don\'t know why.
Anyway, the second thing is it\'s poison.
>> Anyway, the second reason is its poison.
I think everyone almost knows the spider\'s poison is so dangerous.
>> I think everyone knows that spiders poison is lethal.
Especially fancy spiders are more dangerous like poison mushroom.
>> Fancy looking spiders are dangerous such as the poison mushroom.
I don\'t like a spider and think spider is the scariest insect in the world for these reasons
>> That is why I don’t like spiders, and I think they are the scariest insect in the world.
At last when I touched the spider, do you know how I overcame this situation?
>> When I touched the spider, I have to think of how to get rid of it.
I picked up a bunch of wet tissue and pressure it right away.
>> I picked up a bunch of wet tissues and flicked it right away.
If this situation comes to you, do like me
>> If this situation happens to you, just do what I did.
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