The most thing I love in our country
학생이 쓴 원문
I love that we have four season in our country. I like most of things in our country but I think four season is the best. I can feel and learn many things in each season. I hope that many people can experience four season.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow, I envy you huhuhu. Here in the Philippines, we only have 2 seasons. It\'s actually one of my dreams to see snow in person. I can\'t wait to go there during winter. :)
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I love that we have four season in our country.
>>I love that we have four seasons in our country.
I like most of things in our country but I think four season is the best.
>> I like a lot of things in our country but this one is the best.
I can feel and learn many things in each season.
>> CORRECT
I hope that many people can experience four season.
>> CORRECT
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