The most worthwhile thing a person can do.
학생이 쓴 원문
The most worthwhile things I can do in my free time are studying and sewing. It is worthwhile because the more I study, the better my skills and it affects my grades, and it is worthwhile because it gives me a sense of accomplishment because sewing is one of my favorite things. I think a lot of people will choose between what they have to do and what they want to do.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The most worthwhile things I can do in my free time are studying and sewing.
>>> CORRECT!
It is worthwhile because the more I study, the better my skills and it affects my grades, and it is worthwhile because it gives me a sense of accomplishment because sewing is one of my favorite things.
>>> CORRECT!
I think a lot of people will choose between what they have to do and what they want to do.
>>> CORRECT!
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