The movie which influenced me the most
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The movie \'Dead Poets Society \' is one of my favorite movies. The movie has a significant lesson about a good teacher and what kind of education is needed. At that time I was obsessed with good school results for my students, so I was impatient to my students. Sometimes I punished the students who didn\'t do their homework or study hard. After watching the movie, I reflected on my behavior as a teacher.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I haven\'t watched this movie yet, but I will take note of it and watch it in the future. I totally understand how you feel because, for academies, seeing the results through grades is very important. It makes me happy that this movie made you reflect as a teacher, and I think it\'s more fulfilling for you to teach now than before.
- T. Caitlyn
The movie \'Dead Poets Society \' is one of my favorite movies.
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The movie has a significant lesson about a good teacher and what kind of education is needed.
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At that time I was obsessed with good school results for my students, so I was impatient to my students.
>> At that time, I was obsessed with good school results for my students, so I was impatient with my students.
Sometimes I punished the students who didn\'t do their homework or study hard.
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After watching the movie, I reflected on my behavior as a teacher.
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