The necessity of failure for success
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Actually i prefer safety than adventure. So i don’t think failure is necessary for success.
There are a lot of successful people not experiencing the failure. I think the people who failure is important to succeed want to say that seeking out in the challenges is important. But actually there are different a lot of channels to learn these things such as reading books, watching the video.
So we don’t have to experience failure for our success. I’ll have a success in my life without failure.^^
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You were able to explain your thoughts clearly, [이름]! I can\'t wait to see more of your success stories in the future.-Faith-
Actually i prefer safety than adventure. So i don’t think failure is necessary for success.>> Actually, I prefer safety to adventure, so I do not think failure is necessary for success.
There are a lot of successful people not experiencing the failure.
There are a lot of successful people not experiencing the failure.
>> There are a lot of successful people not experiencing failureS.
I think the people who failure is important to succeed want to say that seeking out in the challenges is important.
>> People who think failure is important to succeed want to say that seeking out challenges is important.
But actually there are different a lot of channels to learn these things such as reading books, watching the video.
>> However, there are many different channels to learn these things such as reading books and watching videos.
So we don’t have to experience failure for our success.
>> However, there are many different channels to learn these things such as reading books and watching videos.
So we don’t have to experience failure for our success.
>> Thus, we do not have to experience failure for our success.
I’ll have a success in my life without failure.^^
>> I can have success in life without failures.^^
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