The necessity of resting
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Most people love relaxing and think relaxing is necessary. I think so but too much relaxing can interrupt our career. And i think there are positive and negative relaxing. For example, relaxing at home doing nothing in prep test season makes you mess up the test. So when you have a plan to take a rest, recognize importance of time wisely
강사 첨삭
Good day, Mark! Happiness consists of getting enough sleep and rest. I think that\'s the reason why people love relaxing. However, as we have discussed, too much of everything is not good. Take care and have a wonderful day! ~T. Lyn
Most people love relaxing and think relaxing is necessary.
>>Correct. Most people likve to relax and think they need it.
I think so but too much relaxing can interrupt our career.
>>I agree with them, however, taking too much rest can get in the way of career.
And i think there are positive and negative relaxing.
>>I also think there are advantages and disadvtanges of relaxing.
For example, relaxing at home doing nothing in prep test season makes you mess up the test.
>>For example, taking time off from home during exam prep season can ruin your exam.
So when you have a plan to take a rest, recognize importance of time wisely
>>So be smart about the importance of time when you take a break.
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