The New House

I moved in the new apartment 3 months ago. The space is almost twice than the hause we lived. This is my second house. We had lived nearby parents-in-law's house ever since we married. That was old town, but the new one was planed by government for several years. The raod and archetect is really convenient. I love my new hause. There are so many trees and flowers. When Spring come, It's going to be more beautiful. It's better environment for my daughter and a new baby will birth in June.

Hi M.s [이름]. Thanks for your time to write me a letter. Here are some revisions that you can check on. Have great day!    I moved in the new apartment 3 months ago. >>>I moved in my (or the) new apartment 3 months ago.The space is almost twice than the hause we lived. >>>The space is almost twice than that of the house we lived in.This is my second house. >>>CorrectWe had lived nearby parents-in-law's house ever since we married. >>>We had lived nearby my parents-in-law’s house ever since we married.That was old town, but the new one was planed by government for several years. >>>That was in the old house, but the new one was planed and re-structured by the government for several years. The raod and archetect is really convenient. >>>The road and the architecture is really convenient.I love my new hause. There are so many trees and flowers. >>>house. There are so many trees and flowers around it.When Spring come, It's going to be more beautiful. >>>When spring comes, it’s going to become 9or be) more beautiful.It's better environment for my daughter and a new baby will birth in June.