the nice place in korea.

2010-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I think that Island of Jeju is the most nice place. It's also a part of our country. we can take the boat or plane to go there. it's one of the most popular city to tourist. there are the famous three things.: women, rock, windy. as their husbands sail the sea to cath fish, they go through in danger. Finally, wives left there alone. that's why there are many women in je-ju. rocks are basalt especially. jeju is made of the eruption of a valcano. but now it's an extinct valcano. and also it's the famous way to walk along the coast street. it's similiar to santiago walking way in Chile. actually i have never been to there. so i can't explain detail. but i know it's a city of international tourist attraction.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!  After reading your composition, I felt like I wanted to go to Jeju. I actually saw it in the a Korean drama entitled " Jewel in the Palace" I hope to visit there with you ^^.  See you on Monday! Love, Verna I think that Island of Jeju is the most nice place. >> I think Jeju island is the nicest place.It's also a part of our country. >> Correctwe can take the boat or plane to go there. >> Correct (just begin the sentence in a capital letter)it's one of the most popular city to tourist. >>It's one of the most popular city among tourist.there are the famous three things.: women, rock, windy. >> There are three famous things there: Women, rock, and wind.as their husbands sail the sea to cath fish, they go through in danger.>> When their husbands sail to the sea to catch fish, they are in danger. Finally, wives left there alone. >> So, the wives are left alone.that's why there are many women in je-ju. >> Correctrocks are basalt especially. jeju is made of the eruption of a valcano. >> Rocks are basalt because jeju was formed through volcanic eruption.but now it's an extinct valcano. >> Correctand also it's the famous way to walk along the coast street. >>And also it's a good way to walk along its coastal roads.it's similiar to santiago walking way in Chile. >> It is similar to Santiago coast line in Chile.actually i have never been to there. so i can't explain detail. >>Actually, I've never been there so I can't explain in detail.but i know it's a city of international tourist attraction. >> But I'm sure that it is considered an international attraction.    

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